Bonus Excerpt

Just an excerpt from the young adult novel, Persephone. You can buy it here if you like it:

“How beautiful.”
I jumped, spinning around to face the man on the other side of the counter. “I’m sorry?”
“The flowers.” He gave me a strange look. “They’re beautiful. Poppies and daffodils, right?”
I made a noncommittal noise, and he smiled as if pleased to have guessed right. “It looks great. You have a real gift.”
“Thank you.” I was sure my face was bright red. I’d jumped like the devil himself had patted my shoulder. Now this guy probably thought I was crazy too.
That would be a tragedy. His eyes were the precise shade of liquid gold as Orpheus’. With the exception of his angular face, short haircut, and leaner physique, he could be Orpheus. I wonder if theyre related.
Horrified, I realized I was staring. “Oh…uh…how can I help you?” I tucked a wavy strand of hair behind my ear.
His eyes twinkled in amusement. My cheeks heated as I realized a guy as hot as him must be used to shop girls getting flustered for different reasons than being caught off guard. I glanced at the antique golden bell against the door, cursing myself for being so wrapped up in the stupid flowers that I hadn’t heard it ring when he came in.
“…arrangement to be delivered next weekend,” he was saying, leaning on the counter.
“Of course.” I took a breath to pull myself together. I fished the pen and ordering pad from the pocket of my apron, gathering confidence from the familiar routine. “Can I get your first and last name?”
“Pirithous,” he answered, spelling it for me. He looked down to read the name emblazoned on my chest. “Pleased to meet you, Persephone,” he said, pronouncing it Purse-a-phone.
I ground my teeth together. My mother refused to change the monogrammed name on my apron to Kora. It was getting to the point where I was thinking of getting it fixed myself.
“It’s Persephone,” I corrected. “Kind of like Stephanie. What’s the occasion?” I held the pen poised over the paper.
He grinned and ran his fingers through his golden hair. “My mother’s birthday.”
My eyes widened as I realized why he thought I’d asked. With more emphasis than the situation called for, I wrote “mother’s birthday” on the appropriate line to show him I’d been asking professionally, not fishing to see if he was single.
My face stayed red throughout the ordering process because Pirithous kept teasing me or misinterpreting my questions. I grew angry when I realized he was enjoying seeing me so flustered.
I gave him an innocent smile and dropped his change into his open hand. Pirithous closed it as the cold quarters touched his skin. His fingers brushed against mine. He grinned and, for the first time since he’d walked in the flower shop, looked into my eyes.
His pupils widened and he quickly closed his eyes, looking away from me. “I don’t believe it.”
“No, really,” I babbled, so fast the words ran together. “I just turned sixteen this March. My mom’s a bit paranoid, but you can’t blame her with the university down the street and frat boys all over town.”
“He was right! A daughter of Zeus. I didn’t think there were any left.”
Speaking of frat boys“Isn’t it a little late in the semester for pledging?”
His hand wrapped around my wrist like an iron vice. “Let me go,” he demanded, eyes glittering.
“After you!” I struggled to pull my hand free.
He laughed. “You have no idea, do you? What you are? What you’ve done? Oh that’s right, you can’t lie. You’re really sixteen.” He shook his head as though in disbelief. “Even better. I thought he’d sent me on a fool’s errand. Everyone knows Zeus is dead, but here you are—” his eyes glittered maniacally “—my chance at immortality.”
I yanked my arm back but he didn’t let go. Panic flooded my chest. “Are you high? Let me go!”
I struggled against his grip as he pulled me around the counter. “You’re mine. I found you first. You belong to me!”
I grabbed the counter with my free hand. My fingers closed around a pen, and with more strength than I thought possible I slammed it into his arm.
He howled in pain and I ripped my arm free and scrambled back behind the counter. I yanked open a drawer, spilling the contents, searching for the small knife I used for cutting wires and flower stems. I caught a glimpse of the green handle and grabbed it.
“Stay back!” I waved the arrangement knife in his direction.
“Persephone?” my mother called, throwing open the storage room door. “Is everything—” She looked from Pirithous’ bleeding arm to the knife poised in the air.
I moved between him and my mother. “I’m calling the cops!” I fished my cell phone out of my apron pocket.
That seemed to penetrate Pirithous’ maniac rage enough for him to look up at me, eyes saturated with hate. “I’ll be back for you,” he hissed, then ran out the door.
“Like hell,” I muttered, locking the door behind him.

POV Issues

So I’m writing the third Persephone book and hit a huge roadblock. POV. For reasons I can’t get into here without some major spoilers about book two, the book demands a split point of view.

Point of view is the person telling the story. My stories are generally first person, and Persephone and Daughter of the earth and sky are both narrated by Persephone. Book three required Persephone AND someone else. My plan was to use Hades.

I loved writing from Hades’ point of view. It’s fantastic being in his head, mostly because it’s SUCH a different voice. We’ve seen him only from Persephone’s point of view and she interprets some of the things he does differently than how he intends them. But there were a couple of issues writing from his perspective.

It’s hard enough to channel a man. I’ve got another book I’m working on that has a dual POV between a girl and a boy, so I thought I could manage. But there’s a big difference between a teenage boy, and a God that’s been around for all eternity. I found myself second guessing everything. Would he care about this? Would he react like that? Your characters can only be as mature as you are, and lets face it, if channel teenage girl a better than ancient and wise god there’s probably a reason for that.

Plus I’m getting reviews and fan mail (yes, I have gotten fan mail, 😀 how awesome is that) talking about how awesome Hades is. He’s been nominated for hottest supernatural hunk on goodreads. I don’t want to mess him up. Right now he’s appealing and nice and romantic. Book three is already way darker because of events I can’t delve into. And while writing angry Hades makes me ridiculously happy, it’s different reading it through the lens of Persephone and being in his head.

So I’m experimenting with a different gods point of view. You won’t meet her until book two, and she might not be very well liked due to the events of book two, but she offers an entirely new perspective. One that isn’t so Persephone- centric.

Plus my readers should get used to her because she’s narrating the next trilogy. The series is called DaughterS of Zeus after all.

It’s a small world…

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I cannot believe this happened. It’s too funny! In an effort to perfect my daughters Halloween costume (yes, I plan ahead, and?) I have been searching for the perfect rapunzel crown. Disney, who is generally great at marketing, just hasnt released one that looks remotely like the one from the movie. It’s not a huge deal, but if I’m shelling out money for a toy crown, I’d rather it look like the right one.

I found this picture on google images. Finally! The right crown, but i couldn’t find a place to order it online. So Isent it to some friends who live near Disney stores. One of these friends live in California, and visited her Disney store this weekend. When she showed the picture to the guy behind the register he burst out laughing.

“What?” She asked.
“That’s my picture. That’s my hand and that door.”

Turns out, this random guy in a California Disney store took a picture in 2010 at the disney store, posted it somewhere online and never thought of it again.

In 2012 I found it attached to a wiki about tangled. Not from this guy. The photograph traveled across space and time and eventually landed right back where it came from.

Crazy small world.

Unfortunately, this crown is no longer made by Disney. So all that small world was and the search was moot.

Oh well.

Six degrees of lost

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The Book:
Olive’s mother is headed to jail and her brother to join the Army, so thirteen-year-old Olive is uprooted from sunny California and dumped in Washington State like a stray. That’s exactly what she feels like surrounded by her aunt’s collection of homeless dogs, cats, and horses.

Fourteen-year-old David’s future is already carved in stone. From a military family with two brothers serving overseas, he’s been pointed towards the Air Force Academy his entire life – but a rafting trip gone awry might ruin his chances.

When a runaway dog is almost hit by a car, the search for its owner leads Olive and David, two kids from entirely different backgrounds, to an unlikely bond. Will their growing attraction to each other be enough to keep Olive from a foolhardy journey to find her mother? Will David risk his family’s plans to save her?

My Thoughts: Six Degrees of Lost by Linda Benson put me through the wringer emotionally speaking. The characters were compelling and the story line had me sniffling more than a few times. It’s a great book for animal lovers and has a very cute story time. It’s a bit younger than the young adult I’m accustomed too, but it was still a fantastic read.

Want to try it? http://www.amazon.com/Six-Degrees-of-Lost-ebook/dp/B0087XI14E/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1343603627&sr=8-1&keywords=Six+degrees+of+lost

Fortune Cookies

My husband got an awesome fortune cookie today. It said “you will perform very well on a test, which will lead to a more positive outlook and financial relief. My husband is in the middle of a series of tests which could lead to paychecks, so this was a surprisingly relevant and very welcome fortune cookie.

Bella’s fortune said she had a secret admirer. She probably does. My toddler is a shameless flirt.

My fortune, “Discontentment and anger breeds change in a nation.” fantastic, so we’re going to war soon? I’ve got a bad history with fortune cookies. That got me thinking about a place I used to eat at when I lived in Columbus. I don’t remember the name of the actual restaurant. But it should have been called the creepy fortune place.

My first fortune there was blank. Cause that’s not ominous. My second one was a bit more direct.

“live today, because you won’t tomorrow.”

Yeah, I was eager to leave my home the next day. Let me tell you.

Keep your friends close and your enemies closer.

Okay, maybe a bit less ominous on the heels of the other two, but still!

And the last one before I got the hint and started frequenting restaurants with happier fortunes, “Enjoy your life while it lasts.”

Anyone else got a great/creepy fortune to share?

Blog Tag

Michael over at My Glass House has tagged me in a game of Blog Tag. Thanks Michael for thinking of me!

I’m required to post the rules which are to answer the questions sent to me by Michael, come up with new questions (or keep using the old ones), and as is always the case with these things, tag eleven more bloggers.

1. Who is my favorite author? There are so many to choose from, it just depends on what I’m in the mood for! Most of the time it’s Kelley Armstrong. Her work reminds me of grown up versions of L.J Smith’s nightworld (the old books, I don’t know what happened with the new stuff). Great plots, interesting concepts, and I love the characters.

2. If I could live in another time period, what period would that be? I don’t want to live in another time period. I’d go back in time and visit, make some bank deposits and such, but I wouldn’t want to stay. I like my life here just fine. That, and indoor plumbing.

3. I’ve been published and just landed a movie deal. Which actors would I cast in the two main roles? I’d want Skyler Samuels from The Nine Lives of Chloe King to play Persephone, and David Giuntoli from Grimm to play Hades. I’d also take the girl from Kick Ass (Chloe Grace Moretz) as Persephone.

4. What is my most treasured possession (not people or animals)? My ipad. Yeah, shallow. I don’t have any major family heirlooms, but my ipad has everything on it, my books, my music, my pictures. Honestly, I don’t know how I functioned before it.

5. If I could live anywhere in the world and money where no object, where would I live? On a beach somewhere. I want lots of space, but I also want a grocery store and fun activities to be less than a fifteen minute drive away.

6. When I was a kid, what did I want to be when I grew up? Did I achieve it? I wanted to be a writer. So, yeah. I guess I did.

7. What’s my perfect day? A day with no plans and lots of cuddles with my toddler. I’m really really happy just hanging out at home with my family. When that gets boring, a perfect day involves having enough in the bank account to drive somewhere without worrying about gas, and to eat out, go to a movie, or go do something fun. It doesn’t matter what as long as I’m with them.

8. I get a HUGE advance for my first novel–$250,000. What’s the first thing I’d do with the money? I’d pay off my house, car, and student loans for myself and my husband. I’d probably also buy an electric car. I’m getting really sick of gas prices. What’s left over would go into savings for Bella’s college fund and retirement and all that good stuff.

9. How many times a day do you check your e-mail? I’m sort of always checking my email. It all gets sent to my phone, which I look at every few minutes…

10. What was my nickname in school and how did I get it? Kat and Kitty. Kat was just what I went by, and Kitty just kind of evolved from Kat. I’m short, and I was much cuter as a teenager. It fit.

I’m tagging: Dusty Crabtree, Sharon Ledwith, Amy Severson, Cornell Deville, Arley Cole, Stephanie Campbell, Liz DeJesus, Jack Hillman, L.K Mitchell, Sage Collins, and Cordelia Dinsmore.

Thanks for tagging me, Michael!

Shadow Eyes by Dusty Crabtree

Shadow Eyes reminded me of books like this present darkness and piercing the darkness. There’s angels and demons and they are intimately involved in the day to day struggles of human morals. Everyone struggles with right and wrong, but Iris Kohl understands that struggle more than most. When characters in her world consider making unwise decisions she sees shadows appear around them. Sometimes she sees light figures giving guidance and driving the shadows away. When a new teacher and two mysterious new students transfer to Iris’s school her life gets complex. This novel kept me engaged and curious right to the end. I worried for Iris and her loved ones and wondered about Iris’s mysterious past. I’m interested to see what the rest of the books in this series will be like.

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Blog Tour

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So today begins the Persephone blog tour. Click the link above to view all the stops.

Here’s the stops that have already happened, be sure to drop in and comment if you want to win a free copy of the book.

The very first post was with a Musa author named Sharon. Sharon is an amazing author and just seems to have endless energy. Seriously, she writes, she runs her blog, and she’s ALWAYS posting great resources for the rest of us. You can read my guest blog here

My book was also of course featured on my publishers blog here.

The users over at Truu confessions were given an extended excerpt and had a chance to win a copy of Persephone here.

The first chapter of Persephone is available here along with another chance to win!

There’s a blog about MY favorite character here

And a blog from another fantastic Musa author, Dusty Crabtree here. She even made me a book trailer! I’m so excited!

And last one for the day is on Kayla’s blog here about how I became a writer.

Most days won’t be quite so busy, but expect a new blog a day for the next two weeks. There are personal interviews, guest posts, reviews, excerpts, and character interviews. Enjoy!

The winner is in

So I took all of the comments from Facebook, twitter, and the blog and put them in a random number generator, and the winner is….Amber! Amber please send me an email or a fb message with your email address and ebook reader file type, and I’ll send you a copy of Persephone. Congrats!

It’s live!

Check it out, my book is now live on amazon.com!

It’ll hit the rest of the ebook stores soon. They all have longer waiting periods. Want to win a copy? Post a comment on my blog, facebook page, or twitter page sometime today or tomorrow and you’ll be entered to win.